I'm sorry
The only reason I can give it a 5 is because I don't like rap. Hip Hop is the real. But for rap, you ripped this in half... then little-er pieces. I make rap instrumentals as well. Unfortunately I can't show you them, and I refuse to upload them to this website. Anyways... Nice job. For rap... But I have to think in a rap perspective for this one. Keep killing 'em.